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    I think Chooch's poem is... I think Kale misread the thread
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jean View Post
    KaleKatt and Chooch: are your poems related to the picture?

    EH...Yeah... look like a mass of veins to me
    If it weren't for integrity...what would you be? Ka is a wheel.....

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    yeah, to me as well
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chooch View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by Jean View Post
    KaleKatt and Chooch: are your poems related to the picture?

    EH...Yeah... look like a mass of veins to me
    Right! Even a blind bear could have seen that!

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Soul, searching
    Entrance, subdued
    Inside, compounding
    Exasperation, orgasmic
    Escape, exotic
    "I wish they'd just wipe out humanity and get it over with. It's the waiting I can't stand." -Fry
    "I know we can't all stay here forever, so I want to write my words on the face of today." -Blind Melon

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    excellent, SpaceMaN...


    this contest ends soon and then we'll vote!
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    Quote Originally Posted by SpaceMaN View Post


    Soul, searching
    Entrance, subdued
    Inside, compounding
    Exasperation, orgasmic

    Escape, exotic

    Nice free verse Aaron. It allows the reader to choose the picture rather than paint a picture. That is not easy for me.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Practically painless pineal practitioner
    Is not gone It hasn't melted
    But secretly infiltrated in the most
    Publicly proclaimed pivotal palace


    Anecdotally analyzed anonymously accentuated
    Is bearing upon our senses like
    But bearing no resemblance to
    Acquired ascension artificially acquiesced


    Throw it out All THE RuLeSSS
    Adorn yourself with what
    Love you poses
    And Rise to meet the shadow
    That is also arising


    From within you
    And without you
    “A Human Thought is an actual EXISTENCE, and a Force and Power, capable of acting upon and controlling matter as well as mind.”

    "The ability to speak does not make you intelligent."

    "God always punishes us for what we can't imagine."
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    excellent! we're gonna have lots to choose from!
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    Quote Originally Posted by SpaceMaN View Post

    Soul, searching
    Entrance, subdued
    Inside, compounding
    Exasperation, orgasmic
    Escape, exotic
    Whoa.
    That's awesome, Spaceman.
    The form is ideal for the photo, as is the description the words paint.
    Awesome.

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    Quote Originally Posted by turtlesong View Post
    blue dances down me
    nerves taut with pleasure colors
    electrifying
    OOOooooOOO!
    Very nice, turtlesong.
    Kinda haiku-ish, and quite sexy.

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