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  • Jon

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  • alinda

    2 11.76%
  • educated lady

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  • Jean

    5 29.41%
  • Thaine Rogers

    1 5.88%
  • BROWNINGS CHILDE

    4 23.53%
  • Gaberax

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Thread: Autumn Poetry Contest - PART B - VOTE NOW!!!

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    :!: Autumn Poetry Contest - PART B - VOTE NOW!!!

    We had such an overwhelming response to the contest, that I need to do a series of polls to narrow down to the winner!

    The first round will consist of 2 polls of 7 poems each. The top 4 will advance in each poll. The poems will appear in the order they were submitted!
    So here we go!!!


    1. Jon...


    The beauty of leprosy




    The search for food and I struggle again

    Oh how you all marvel at the beauty of my pain

    I slowly starve and you gawk at the colors of my decay

    I shade you for the hot season and then I am merely a display

    My body changes colors as my energy is sapped

    I hold little reserve to be tapped

    I withdraw into myself as body parts turn brown

    Then, in a few days you must harvest them from the ground.

    Your back aches from cleaning up after my leprosy

    Let’s make a deal among all of you and all of we.

    You ask that yellow disk to always stay in the sky

    And we will spare you the mess each year as our hunters die



    2. alinda...


    When I was a young girl
    as summer faded slow,
    We kids would rake the yard
    the parents pride you know.

    For hours it seemed we'd gather
    the remnants of its glory
    Father would take some and
    set them afire, the smell of it
    still in my memory...

    It was always permitted tho'
    before that last leaf fell
    to make that one last pile.
    Then we would laugh and leap
    into the late days dream.

    I remember, and still smile.


    3. educatedlady...


    The Change
    The trees grow bare
    Skies a gloomy grey
    Reds, golds and browns
    Mix together in death and beauty.
    Soon the snow will begin and
    I will say farewell to autumn.



    4. Jean...


    Autumn Chant

    Bright are the colors of doom and defeat,
    Funeral wreaths please the eye of the dead,
    Red-cloaked drummers will beat a retreat,
    Hope me no hopes, for the future is read.

    Show me no rubies, no gold of the loot:
    Bright are the colors of doom and defeat,
    Frail was the armor you crush underfoot,
    Red-cloaked drummers will beat a retreat.

    Colors of gore come to lighten the grief:
    Funeral wreaths please the eye of the dead.
    Scarlet the plague that will ravage your fief.
    Hope me no hopes, for the future is read.



    5. Thaine Rogers...


    One fine day
    The air tastes crisp
    Cold
    Stark
    Against my tongue.
    Every inhalation
    breath
    moment
    is another taste of autumn.
    Golden yellow leaves fall
    topple
    drift
    And settle soundlessly on the pavement.
    Where they sit
    Snap
    Mumble
    Underneath the boots and shoes of a thousand hurrying souls.
    One fine day.
    One fine day


    6. BROWNINGS CHILDE...


    All Hallow's Eve

    The westering sun soaks the earth,
    With tints of burning crimson.
    Sinister shadows creep behind,
    Or crawl along ahead.

    All Hallows Eve's crepuscular rays,
    Bring gloaming death in season.
    The darkness bests the sun's assault,
    And fills the soul with dread.

    The children laugh from door to door,
    As demons watch and wait.
    Ensconsed within each gloom and shade,
    They'll stay untill they've fed.

    As monster's scream from plastic masks,
    With threats of "Trick or Treat",
    The real ghouls lurk with growing need,
    To rent, and tear, and shred.

    A groaning wind whines through the trees,
    It whispers and it sighes.
    Jack-O-Lanterns search the night,
    With eyes of gleaming red.

    As ghosts and witches roam the streets,
    A straggler falls behind.
    The ambush happens silently,
    And in the dark he's bled.

    Though most will make it home of course,
    With candy in their bags.
    At least in one child's room tonight,
    There'll be an empty bed.



    7. Gaberax...


    Autumnal Sacrament

    The old oak tree outside my front door laughs.
    Shaking its great shaggy mane of yellows and browns and reds.
    Shedding its frabjous green summer coat, now worn in patches, of ochre and umber and carmine.
    Stretching, yawning and twisting its mighty limbs in the cooling evening breezes.
    Basking in the pale fading sunlight.
    Anticipating another winter’s hibernation.
    Tucked away inside itself; silent and still.
    Sleepily admiring the work it has prepared for me.
    Spring’s leaves of promise; contorted and desiccated
    A mottled arabesque littering the earth below
    Waiting for my final rituals of plastic rake and garbage bags and aching muscles
    And pagan fires
    Lit beneath its gnarled branches.
    Humble votives
    Ambrosia to imaginary Gods
    A silent prayer for us both
    For safe passage through the coming darkness
    To the promise of the light
    Beyond.
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    I hardly voted.

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    can't choose between alinda's and BROWNING'S...

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    As I struggled to find the most creative; I decided upon Jean's.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Alinda's poem sparked a fond memory in me.
    Grrr...

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    Alinda sparks fond things in me all the time!
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    I have three votes! I have three votes!

    I can't believe it! I can't believe it!!!



    I have voted for alinda's.

    There are, in fact, four poems that tied for me, and three of them are in this group - they are alinda's, BROWNING'S, and Jon's; Fruno's was in the other group alone, and I voted for it.

    I have chosen alinda's, although the three in question, however different, are equally dear to me, because both Jon and BROWNING'S CHILDE have inexhaustible treasuries of poems that keep coming, and alinda posts so rarely it is like a special occasion which can't be missed.

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Jean...you showed a creativity in this poem that I have never seen from you. As I said of others; it is great to see the evolution. It may not feel like it; but it looks to me as if you stepped up a level in your works. Keep cutting loose. You earned those three votes and more if I could vote more than once.

    I'll be looking forward to your future work.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    I voted for the bears, though this was a hard one.

    "...neither the stupid jokes nor the easy surface emotions were the truth of Cuthbert Allgood."

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    I voted for Jon.

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    It was between Jon and Jean. But, in the end, the title of Jon's poem won it for me.
    Sloth Love Chunk

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    I would consider it an honor to lose to the bear.
    Sloth Love Chunk

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    Luckily, neither of us is losing so far, looks like we both advance, and so, I believe, do Jon and alinda, which is great! We may all yet lose to Fruno.

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Yes. I suspect Fruno will kick our asses.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jon View Post
    Yes. I suspect Fruno will kick our asses.
    I believe you're right.

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    thank you ladysai, you really know how to encourage!

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jean View Post
    thank you ladysai, you really know how to encourage!
    It wasn't meant as discouragement...
    only a recognition of Fruno's wonderful way with words!

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    yes, Fruno is fantastic...

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    one more day!
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    Loved this:

    7. Gaberax...


    Autumnal Sacrament

    The old oak tree outside my front door laughs.
    Shaking its great shaggy mane of yellows and browns and reds.
    Shedding its frabjous green summer coat, now worn in patches, of ochre and umber and carmine.
    Stretching, yawning and twisting its mighty limbs in the cooling evening breezes.
    Basking in the pale fading sunlight.
    Anticipating another winter’s hibernation.
    Tucked away inside itself; silent and still.
    Sleepily admiring the work it has prepared for me.
    Spring’s leaves of promise; contorted and desiccated
    A mottled arabesque littering the earth below
    Waiting for my final rituals of plastic rake and garbage bags and aching muscles
    And pagan fires
    Lit beneath its gnarled branches.
    Humble votives
    Ambrosia to imaginary Gods
    A silent prayer for us both
    For safe passage through the coming darkness
    To the promise of the light
    Beyond.


    Voted for it.

    Thanks for the votes on my little piece
    very kind of you to say such nice things as posted here.
    ((((((((hugs you both)))))))

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    Thank you, alinda.
    Grrr...

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    WE will move to next round once the tiebreaker is finished in Section A...

    Jon
    alinda
    Jean
    BROWNINGS CHILDE advance!
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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